If you've ever wanted to see how real editor feedback shapes an author's work, this is the class for you! In this session, I'll share how the opening chapter of THE GREAT OUTDOORS iterated into its final, published version—including actual feedback I got from my editor at Simon & Schuster during the revision process! We'll do a live edit during class, which will include a mix of big-picture issues all the way down to tiny line edit tweaks, with bonus thoughts on "How do I know which notes I should take?" that you can apply to your own projects.